Feedback

We had a film viewing to our class to get useful feedback. The part that everyone liked the most was the wipe screen transition. The main improvement we need is to add more story. To do this we have decided to add a voice over from the main character. We want our voice over to let the audience understand the character more but not reveal the film. Our favourite idea is for her to say a famous quote then make fun of it, to show she has a reckless outlook on life.